Dear concerned Pakistanis(hopefully),
As i was watching the tv there was a news flash that Jamshed Dasti wins the elections,due to the exams i really don`t care about what's happening in the rest of the world these days but this news just made me forget about everything else,and made me remember of PPP's past-made me remeber of Mir Israr Ullah Zehri,a person who condoned the act of 5 women being buried alive and is still a minister,Mr. Sadiq Umrani, whose younger brother performed this act and is still not arrested and now there was Jamshaid Dasti a person who got humiliated in front of the whole court because of his fake degress and to save him from further humiliation he was advised by the supreme court that it's in his own interest that he resigns himself before the court takes any action.But instead PPP offers him a ticket to take part in the elction and not only that but our very honourable prime minister came to his campaigings and openly supported him and made a mockery of the judicial system.The person who should rather be the perfect example of upholding law and order.
When will this end?
When will PPP stop taking our country and people as a joke?
When will the families of those 5 women get justice?
When will we stop sitting in our couches/ beds etc and write notes like this or debate and instead take some action?
When Will our judicial system get power?
WHEN?
Its about time we realise our duty as a Pakistanis and take some action,and believe me it`s time!
Yours truly,
Hamza Ghaznavi/concerned citizen.
10U0035
Sec D
As i was watching the tv there was a news flash that Jamshed Dasti wins the elections,due to the exams i really don`t care about what's happening in the rest of the world these days but this news just made me forget about everything else,and made me remember of PPP's past-made me remeber of Mir Israr Ullah Zehri,a person who condoned the act of 5 women being buried alive and is still a minister,Mr. Sadiq Umrani, whose younger brother performed this act and is still not arrested and now there was Jamshaid Dasti a person who got humiliated in front of the whole court because of his fake degress and to save him from further humiliation he was advised by the supreme court that it's in his own interest that he resigns himself before the court takes any action.But instead PPP offers him a ticket to take part in the elction and not only that but our very honourable prime minister came to his campaigings and openly supported him and made a mockery of the judicial system.The person who should rather be the perfect example of upholding law and order.
When will this end?
When will PPP stop taking our country and people as a joke?
When will the families of those 5 women get justice?
When will we stop sitting in our couches/ beds etc and write notes like this or debate and instead take some action?
When Will our judicial system get power?
WHEN?
Its about time we realise our duty as a Pakistanis and take some action,and believe me it`s time!
Yours truly,
Hamza Ghaznavi/concerned citizen.
10U0035
Sec D
Looks good
ReplyDeleteVery well written the issues have been correctly identified and the ending positive note is something all Pakistanis should learn from
ReplyDeleteYou have indeed a bright future ahead of you
Classic example of how to use rhetoric properly.
ReplyDeletePathos Argumentation, though.
But Good Pathos Argumentation, nonetheless.
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